In Live-Blogging Parkinson’s: (Re)Learning to Walk by Jeff
Howe, I noticed how the movement in the piece paralleled the content nicely. The
piece developed a rhythm, where each successive sentences would start out with
the same word: “We take it for granted. We don’t analyze it. We don’t think about it. We
just put one foot in front of the other and go wherever we want…I have always been a walker/runner. I’ve had no choice” (emphasis
added). Such a stylistic choice mirrors and reinforces the conversation Howe is
having about walking and running, and the natural rhythm he once felt when
engaging in these activities, so natural that his body fell into these patterns
with no real conscious thought. I am not sure in this case if I can
differentiate whether the approach is information based, action based or
character based because it feels like all three, and that all three are closely
intertwined. He is surely giving us information on how Parkinson’s disease
affects the mobility of a body, but he is doing it almost purely through
describing actions and the terrible loss of the before and after. Yet he is
also describing himself, specifically, giving us a growing sense of the speaker
as a character. This blog met my expectations of what it would be: a short, unified,
interesting, personal work that felt meaningful and well-put together.
I think I enjoyed Amy Tan’s “How to Start and End an Email”
the best of the three because I feel it does so many things to interact with
the reader. First, it is a topic almost anyone can identify with (and certainly
if you are reading it on the web), and I have felt myself vaguely anxious about
this very subject. I even had a conversation recently with another student
about it. Second, it shows that Amy Tan is not some infallible, perfect author
who always knows exactly what to write, and she gives us some insight into her
personal life with phrases like: “Kisses and
hugs. That is not something that came naturally to me until more recently --in
the last ten years. My family did not hug and kiss. Or maybe you
hugged someone if they were leaving for years. But I've adapted. I hug
more often.’” She even writes of wasting time and procrastinating with these
emails and her mental wanderings about them, which most any writer can identify
with. Her language is pleasantly informal, which makes it inviting to readers,
but she never strays into slang.
The third blog, “I Love
Typography: an Interview with Kunihiko Okano," I liked least of all. Maybe it
was the unexpected form, an interview when the other two seemed more like
public journals, although I think I could have gotten over that if the subject
matter had been more accessible. I got caught up in much of the jargon that was
used. In phrases like “The assignment
was to draw letters from a randomly generated TypeCooker recipe” and “When I
designed the Latin component of the Japanese typeface, Hiragino UD, I drew it
so that the width of the characters remained the same across all weights and
styles” I could figure out what he was referring to, but I still felt distanced
from his process and his excitement about it because of these unfamiliar
technical phrases and words. I did have a strong point of entry in this piece,
though: “With Quintet, there are at least thirty different combinations and, if
colors are added, the permutations permit almost infinitive possibilities.” For
some reason it took this statement (about half way through the interview) for
it to finally click in my head that this was a pretty cool, interesting project
and a lot of creativity and thought went into it. I think it also gave me a
more simple broad way of entering into an understanding of Okano’s vision for
the font and why it was a project worth reading about.
Wow, great note on the rhythm of the piece! I hadn't even considered it to be mimetic of a walking rhythm, but that totally makes sense. I tend to read very closely into poetry more than prose, so this was a good reminder for me to apply my super-super close reading to prose as well. Awesome post!
ReplyDeleteEveryone seems to dislike the interview so far. But I imagine that's kind of the point.. To get a different perspective. To show how you can completely shut out an audience.
ReplyDeletei think you read into the Redroom post well. Her voice was very relatable.
It's interesting how each piece differed entirely. I think noticed this in your post.
I also enjoyed your response to Howe's blog - There was definitely a rhythm to it, and to connect that to the rhythm of walking was interesting. I wonder if this was an intentional connection made by how or if this is just how the words came to him as he was writing. There was so much emotion underlying his blog I'm almost hoping he didn't put that much thought in to it. Which opens up questions about creativity and where our art flows from, and how much editing should really be going in to the process. Blogging, it seems to me, is a medium that comes across as relatively minimal on the editing.
ReplyDeleteAmanda,
ReplyDeletea lot about this is thoughtful and you give good details. The other readers were able to appreciate some of your points. The point of liking or disliking is about the Personal point of entry and it would be interesting to talk about what pulls us in.
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